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तिमी बिना बाँच्नै नसक्ने भएछु (गजल)

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बज्र कुमार राई

तिम्रो सम्झनामा मेरो आँसु पिउँदा-पिउँदै पिउन नसक्ने भएछु
जिउँदा-जिउँदै तिम्रो नाममा जिन्दगी, म जिउन नसक्ने भएछु
 
स्वर अनायासै लर्बरायो, तिम्रो प्रेमको बखान गर्दा-गर्दै
म मदहोशीमा तिम्रो तस्वीर हेरेर बोल्नै नसक्ने भएछु
 
मन यसै भक्कानियो, तिम्रो कल्पनामा खेल्दा-खेल्दै
म आँखा पुछेर हरेक पल्ट, दिलको ढोका खोल्नै नसक्ने भएछु
 
बन्द भए भट्टीपसल, साथीहरुले छोडी गएछन्
बाटो तिर्मिर्याएर पाईलामा, गन्तव्यमा म पुग्नै नसक्ने भएछु
 
रात निस्पट अध्यारो भएपछि, शहर मस्त निदाएछ
म हिँड्दै गरेको गल्लीमा बर्बराउँदै, सुतनै नसक्ने भएछु
 
त्यहि रातमा भेट्नेहरुले मरेको ठानेर, तर्सदै हिंडेपछि
भूत लखेट्ने कुकुरबाट, म टोक्नै नसक्ने भएछु
 
भोलिको पहिलो झिसमिसेमा, कक्रिएर ब्युँझेपछि
लाज शरमको पोको लुकाई, म भाग्नै नसक्ने भएछु
 
कसले बुझ्छ मेरो कथा, थर न ठेगाना भएपछि
त्यै भट्टीमा भोलिबाट, म एक्लै मात्र नबिक्ने भएछु
 
बिहानी भो, दिन आयो, दिन गयो फेरी रात आएछ
त्यही रातमा फेरी म तिमीबिना बाँच्नै नसक्ने भएछु
 
Comments (28)
hi bajra ji!
1 Monday, 23 November 2009 21:32
roshan subba
aafhno premlai bhattimaa lagera teti samma hunu bhayechha.nice gajal .naya pragoy cha tapai ko yo lekhai maa.gajal maa marmik katha bastu chha.prem maa jj bhaye pani bhattibata gantyba maa chai pugnu parchha hai .lekhdai janu hola saphaltako kamana.
sarai man paryo bajradaiko gajal
2 Tuesday, 24 November 2009 15:41
lucky
bajra dai...j hos gajal sarai ramro cha...gajalko bhav chai man paryo dherai.....plzzz bhattima chai dherai na ajanu hola.....
dherai ramro chha
3 Tuesday, 24 November 2009 19:07
arun
bajra bro kya milayera lekhnu bhayechha .........prem maa phasepachhi yestai hunchha manchhe.aru aru rachana haru pabni padne abasar milos. keet it up.
very nice gajal
4 Tuesday, 24 November 2009 23:24
ritu
bajra g kay ramro lekhnu vaye6 .... vatti pasal jane ani timi bina bachan nai nasakne vaye6u vanne yo ta vayeni hahahahhahhhh ... janu hunna hai . dukha ta kaslai pardaina ra . raksi le pir bethya bagaudaina kay bajra g ..... feri feri padne aabasar milos .. lekhdai janus ... best of luck 4 long way ..............
wouuu
5 Thursday, 26 November 2009 20:40
parbat
bajra jee aaja tapaile mero man ko kura chhinnu vo. yo sabai hamro jiwan maa hune kura ho. tapai ko gajal maa bhawana ati nai stariy chha.....bhut lakhetne kukur bata ma toknai nasakne bhayechhu. yo sarai man paryo. tapaiko gajalle sabai lai sikchha milos prem garne haru dhoka maa bachnu naros ra yesto pani hunu naparos..........ma pani bhatti maa ......kunai samay testai hunchhan kt haru. don;t believe them love. just buy n use. kya man ko kura lekhnu vo .....may i get ur mailling id??/ plzzzz nirantar rahos hai yo yatra tapai ko.......
j hos bhawana maa gahirai dherai chha
6 Friday, 27 November 2009 13:28
manoj khatri
tapai ko lekhne saili ramro lagyo. ra jasari yo gajal maa purai katha ataunu bhayeko chha. kamai matra ma padchhu dherai gajal lekhne haru maa.tapai ko rachana haru padnbe abasar sadhai milos. shubhakamana tapai lai
prashansha garna lageko .......
7 Tuesday, 01 December 2009 18:22
mukti neupane
oh kabi jyu .tapaiko 2 ta rachana nai maile pade ti 2 nai ramra chhan. yo gajal kasto mood maa lekhnu bhayo.singo katha nai po gajal banayera lekhnu bhayeko chha ta ? very very nice gajal.aajahi padna dinus hai.yatra saphal bandai jawos
wouuuu no words.......
8 Tuesday, 01 December 2009 18:33
prabhuram
wauuuuuu bro. herda ta bharkharko chhau.tara kati ramro milayera mero katha po lekhechhau .hahahahhbro. its really really touchable .by heart i want more n more ....la .keep it up .
aashu ra haso mishrit gajal
9 Wednesday, 02 December 2009 17:53
kapildev tripathi
gajalkar bajra kumar rai!tapaiko yo gajal sachai nai man chhune ani kata kata bhawana maa bagna anubhuti dine khal ko chha.aru rachana pani paskanu hola.lakhau holan yo sansaar maa tapaiko gajal jasto bhayera jiune haru .,.........samarpan garnus ti manchhe haru lai.....jasle maya gumayera bhatti samma gayera aafhulai yesari marne garchhan......
प्रेम् र भट्टीको मितेरिमा लेखिएको यो गजल् गहिरो छ।
10 Wednesday, 02 December 2009 21:18
सरोज
वा वा वा यो गजल पढेर प्रेममा पागल हुनु नहुने रहेछ भन्ने थाहा भयो।घर पुग्न पनि गाह्रो हुने रहेछ यस्तो हुँदा त ।धन्यवाद गजल लेख्ने बज्रजी लाई।साह्रै मिठो र गहिरो छ कथा भने।त्यो त शाहने लाई नै थाहा होला।साह्रै यथार्थ हो यो।अरु धेरै पढ्न दिनु होला।
dharai bhabuk pani ani simlpe pani tara yethartha
11 Thursday, 03 December 2009 21:06
dependra
gajal le euta sacho premile premika napauda garne kura lai katha nalekhera gajal lekheko padda ramailo lagyo .gajalkar bajra kumar rai lai shubhakamana.aru ajhai ramr0o rachana haru padna dinu hola.
YO GAJAL PRATI MERO MAN MAA LAGEKO KURA .......
12 Friday, 04 December 2009 10:40
AASHA GURUNG
GAJAL RAMRO CHHA.BHAWANA KO GARIRAI GAHIRO CHHA.KATI KO COMMENT TA GAJAL LEKHNE BAJRA KUMAR RAI NAI TESTO BHAERAHEKO ABASTHA BHANNE SAMMA KO 6.MERO BHANE ALIK PHARAK COMMENT CHHA.MAIN TA BAJRA JI LAI KTA HARU TA PREM MAA EKLO HUDA BHATTIKO SAHARA RA SATHI HARUKO SATHA MAA HUNCHHA.YESO SAMJHANUHOS TA BAJRA JI LAGAYET COMMENT LEKHNE SABAI LE EUTI PREMIKA LE YESTO BHOGNU PARDA KO CHHENA K HOLA??? SAMAJ LE KT LAI TA BHATI ......JJ PANI SWIKAR GARCHHA TARA KTI LAI NI ....??? YO AABESHA HOENA SATYA BOLNA KHOJEKO MATRAI HO.SO BAJRA JI ABA AAUDO DIN MAA KTI KO BAREMAA PANI LEKHNU HOLA .PADNA PAU .......
Funny but nice
13 Saturday, 05 December 2009 00:37
Ritu rai
pream ko bahana ma vattipasal dhaune premi haru dekhera bichara vanna man lag6 ... anyway bajra g ko gajal dherai ramro 6 ............. but ....sacho maya garne le kunai sanka garnu hudaina ................... its real ............. ra vatti ma ni janu pardaina ................ yestai ramra ramra gajal padna pau .............
oh god .... save him life...thid movement..
14 Monday, 07 December 2009 17:27
kishan
oh my god! wt i hreared??? plz god just save him.....daju jiwan amulya chha.tapai kina testo......prem lai bhagya maa pani khojne kosis gareko bhaye hunthyo ni.jun kura bhagya maa chhaena why u crazy 4that?? just i can pray 4 u now .....i hoped u r...oky.k yehi gajal nai antim thiyo ta ???? oh god save him plz plz plz.......
bhav bujhne ho bhane ramro chha tara jasle yo real follow garchha tyo ati nai man naparne....
15 Monday, 07 December 2009 17:42
shashi
wouuuuuu love ma yesto. hana kta haru bhatti ma po jane rahechha .ramrai chha.yesto fun garudai garnu hola hai
ramro chha
16 Wednesday, 09 December 2009 10:57
kedar khatri
lekhai ramro chha.bhavle bhanna khojeko kura ramro lagyo.rai jee ko yo gajal euta arkai ananda ko lagyo malai,lekhai maa rai jee ko aafhani maulikta dekhe . sacho artha maa lekhne testo hudainan.
rai jee ko ujyalo bhabishyako kamana gardchhu. leklhdai janu hola.
prem lai bhatti maa yesari piudai maa jiuna sikidaina kanchha
17 Wednesday, 09 December 2009 14:27
prakash
hahaahaha kanchha. yo gajal maa timro prem amar chha .tara sacho jindagi maa yo ati nai ghatak ho.maya garchhu bhanera dekheune aru dherai bato haru chhan.yo ta kayerta pradarshan garnu ho.sakchhau ta khushi deu .sakdaina ta aashu pani nadeu sadhai maya lai.
prem maa ta khushi po hunu parchha ra jiwan lai sarthak banaune bato po khojnu parchha.u r not baby aba ta.....aasha garchhu timi pahilako jastai sochne chhau.ra garne chhau.
himmat gara .almal nagara aba samay dherai mathi chha .follow garne kosis gara.
aashu ra pida hoena khushi baddai aaghadi bada.sayed yo comment nabhayera timilai chiththi bhayo hola.tara timro reality maa yehi hola sayed.jiwan lai long sochne gara.prem chahinchha yo satya ho. timi kina tyo paudai nau wa bujhdainau i m surprise.....ki sachai nai chhadi diyo timi lai timro premika le ???hahahah timi prem ta garchhau pakka ho tara alik tarika pharak hunchha jasto lagchha hai malai.
i know u plz don;t follow always bhatti,smoke .... pakkai pauchau yedi haseu ra hasayeu bhane timi lai maya garne...sano ko euta kura yaad dilauchhu ..hasa ta timi sanga sansaar haschha. royeu bhane timi eklai runu parchha.
health is wealth hai kanchha.swastha ko ramro khyal gara.....yo sahitya yatra ramro banos timro.yesko lagi ma gilla garera haseko bhane hoena . wish u all the best.oh by the way ritu yehi ta hoena haahaahah
gajal bhanda bhawana ramro chha .prem yesto ......hos
18 Friday, 11 December 2009 20:49
rajedra khanal
gajalkar bajra kumar rai jee lai pratham ta dhanyabad . kati ramro sanga sabda maa utarnu bhayechha prem maa phasne haruko pida lai .prem maa sansar nai sakiye pachhi k garchha ta euta sacho premi le .
wouuuuuu kya prem bhatti maa hahahahha
19 Monday, 14 December 2009 20:57
rojina
na runai man lagyo na ta hasanai tara hsachhu hahahhaha ramro chha gajal. yo gajal chahi pakkai bhatti bata nai lekheko hola . han kina hau yesto marihatte hahahah
yo gajal lai print garera goji maa rakhirakhchhu .ramro chha yar....
20 Saturday, 19 December 2009 21:22
pradip
yo gajal paddai aafhu bhupo gf lai samjhadai piuda sarai majja aauchha yarrr .la hai rai bandhu bro.yesto fun garaunu hai aru aru ......
amamama jhan yo ta ........
21 Sunday, 20 December 2009 20:50
sabina subba
amamama kati gahiro prem hau bhatti ma nai yesari janu parne .ramro chahi chha hai. yedi yo nai bhatti bahira hune ho bhane ta jhan ramro hunthyo hola .aba fresh pani lekhnus ta .prem maa fresh huda kasto hudorahechha hahahah
ramro chha
22 Thursday, 24 December 2009 11:48
bishal ambule
gajal maa euta premi ko katha ateko chha.ramro lagyo.ajhai aru badne abasar milos. hal korea
नबबर्षा २०१० को हार्दिक मंगलमय् शुभकामना
23 Saturday, 26 December 2009 21:17
बज्र कुमार राई
प्रथमत: हङ्कङ नेपाली डट कम परिवारप्रति आभारी छु।साथै नबबर्षा २०१० को हार्दिक मंगलमय शुभकामना ब्यक्त गर्दछु।
मलाई ब्यक्तिगत रुपमा चिन्नु,जान्नु र बुझ्नु हुने एवं मेरो सिर्जनालाई आ-आफ्नै सोचैले कमेन्ट गर्नु लेखनु हुने सबै साहित्य अनुरागी साथीहरुमा पनि नवबर्षा २०१० को हार्दिक शुभकामना दिन चाहन्छु।
अौँदा दिन हरुमा पनि तपाईंहरुको यो स्नेह र मायाको अपेक्षा राख्दछु।यसका साथै मलाई नभएर मेरो सिर्जनामा केन्दित रहेर कमेन्ट लेखनु भएे म आझै आभारी हुने थिए।तपाईहरुको जीवन सफल बनोस यो मेरो सदिक्षा पनि'''''''
purano life ko yaad aayo .....
24 Tuesday, 29 December 2009 20:26
bishnu
bajra ji tapai ko yo gajal ramro lagyo. malai purano mero life ko yaad aayo. thank u bajra ji. eka patak pheri prem maa bitayeko yaadle alikati chhoyo. ani tapai chahi ahile po ......?? hahahha yo yatra sadhai jari rakhera naya naya srijana haru padna dinu hola. mero shubhakamana
kafiya namileko jasto chha
25 Thursday, 07 January 2010 21:51
ruben pun magar
gaja samrachana ramro ho tara gajalko mukhye anga kaafiya namileko mahasus hunchha jastai - pahilo haraf atahawa misra ya ula ma kafiya PIUNA ra misara ya sani athawa dosro harafma kafiya JIUNA ekdam mileko chha tara anye harafma kafiya namileko mahsush hunchha . bajra ji le kafiya khojna ma alik mehanat garnu parchha jasto chha. आज अलि कति बढी, पीए मैले मदहोसिमै फाटेको मन, सीए मैले मनमा कुदिएका कुरा बरबरावदै बेहोसीमा सबै बोलि, दिए मैले पर बसी रुदै थिईन घुघ घुघ उनको आशु हत्केलामा, लिए मैले नशा संगै पिई दिए त्यो आशु भनेछु आज सम्म यसरि, जिए मैले baglung- now malaysia
पीउदा पीउदै यस्तो भइयो
26 Saturday, 27 February 2010 17:50
Sundar Prasad Shrestha
पीउदा पीउदै यस्तो भइयो सवका सामु सस्तो भइयो... यस्तै रहेछ जिन्दगीको रित यहां सवको नजरमा विरहको गित भइयो जे होस राई जि गजल चाहि मन छुने नै छ गजल गजल नै हो, वास्तविक जिन्दगी त अर्कै छ सुन्दर ,काठमाण्डौ.
sorry
27 Sunday, 25 July 2010 11:09
Resham lama
hey bro .i would like to say sorry coz im going to cupy it on my link ok .i really like it .goodluck for ur further creation.
very nice gajal wa wa wa wa wa wa........................
28 Tuesday, 14 June 2011 16:58
sandesh
gajal le euta sacho premile premika napauda garne kura lai katha nalekhera gajal lekheko padda ramailo lagyo .gajalkar bajra kumar rai lai shubhakamana.aru ajhai ramr0o rachana haru padna dinu hola. ok by by

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